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ياصاحب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           المبداء                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           ترى                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            الحلم                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            رجالاذا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             ذبحت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             الحلم                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             راحت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             رجولة
راح                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       الزمن                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       في                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ما                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        مضاله                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        من                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        افعالوكلن                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             على                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             ماقيل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             نوخ                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              ذلوله
هذا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       زمن                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       (من                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       له                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       حيله                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       فيحتال)عادي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           ترى                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            والنفس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            ماهي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            خجولة
ياما                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      عليها                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      الارض                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      من                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      زود                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       الاحمالياهي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           تحمل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            شي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            ماحد(ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            يطوله
بعض                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      البشر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      يحتاج                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      له                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ضربة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      اعقالنقص(ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           على                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           الدنيا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           بعرضه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           وطوله
وبعض                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           البشر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           متكبر(ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            كنه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            جبالودك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             تصطر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             خشته                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             في                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             نعوله
وبعض                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           الرجال                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           من                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            النعومة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            بيختالودك يلبسط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¹ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط·آ¢ط¢آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬رحة(ن) مثل خوله*
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وبعض                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     البشر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     لاضقت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     وقف                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ولك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      قالضيقتك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                هذي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 هينات(ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 حلوله
تبي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       وجاهة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       فيه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        والا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        تبي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        مالبس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            لاتضيق                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            بشي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             يابن                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             الحموله
هذا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             هو                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              اللي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              لاتمنيت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              رجاليسد                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  بالدنيا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  بعرضه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   وطوله

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