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قديم 19-02-2008, 11:14 AM   رقم المشاركة : 3
النهر الخالد
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افتراضي رد: خلاص الوقت علمنـي ..


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أبرسـل                                                          لك                                                          مـع                                                           ابيـاتـي                                                           علامـات(ن)                                                           بـهـن                                                           تبـصيــروابوصف  لك  معـالم  جـرح  ينـزف  وسط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬وجدانــي
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خلاص                                                                       الوقت                                                                       علمني                                                                       حفظت                                                                       الدرس                                                                        بالتكريــرنصيحه                                                   لا                                                   تجي                                                    وان                                                    جيـت                                                    مـا                                                    ظنيـت                                                    تلقانـي




القديرة والمبدعة دائما

ساره الشهري


ما شاء الله عليك

أبهرتني هذه الشامخة بشموخك أنت

حتى بغنائها قمت اشدوا واطرب بمعانيها السهله جدا

رغم الألم كأني تعودت أن أقرئها دائما

الله عليك على هذا التصوير الجميل بجميع أبياتها

هكذا أتت !!.... وهكذا تحلو !!.... وهكذا نتألق بمصافحة هذه

الدره النادره من شظايا القلب الباهر بالنقاء والصفاء !!

ما هذا سيدتي.....

اهوا جمال ... أم .إبداع...أم احتراف

ماذا أقول وأنا اكتب نثرا وإعجابا لهذه النجوم المتلألئة باشطرها

الجميله ........

ماذا لو قصّرت في شي قد فاتني بهذه الورود الجميله بمعانيها لم اكتب فيها

رغم قساوة بعض أبياتها !!!!

وحنينها ....!!!

ووداعها !!!

هل هي تذبل ؟؟

أم تنمو؟؟

لكي تبقى في الوجود تستنشق

رائحتها الزكيه !!





ساره الشهري


قد قرأت هذا النص الجميل ....

وتمعّنت في جميع الابيات .........

وجاز لي الغناء على وتر الإحساس من اوّل وهلة.......

لذاا....

هل تسمحين لي يا سيدتي بان انقلها الى مجلدي الخاص لكي احتفظ بها مع بعض القصائد اللتى نالت اعجابي في هذا المجلد الملئ بإبداعات الشعراء المبدعين من أمثالك؟؟


واخيرا وليس اخرا.......

سوف أبقى لكي أقرئها دائمااا لأنها بالفعل قصيده تستحق شاعرتها الشكر والثناء على هذا العطاء المثمر.......

وهذا الإبداع المتميز بالفعل .....


[blink]ساره الشهري[/blink]
صح لسانك عدد ذرات الكون سيدتي

وأجدد إعجابي بقلمك وشاعريتك مدى الحياة .......

واسمحي لي إذا كان هناك أي قصور .............

تقبلي فائق شكري واحترامي لكي سيدتي






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