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القصايد                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     فيك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     منظومه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     مثل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     نظم                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     الدرركل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     بيت(ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     في                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     عيونك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     اكتبية                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     وعانقيه
جابك                                                                                                                                                                            الله                                                                                                                                                                            وأنت                                                                                                                                                                             لك                                                                                                                                                                             في                                                                                                                                                                             وسط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬شرياني                                                                                                                                                                             مقروصار                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     قلبي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     لك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     يردد                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     والمشاعر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     تحتويه
مرحبا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     بللي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     حضر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     يامرحبا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      بللي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      حضرمثل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ترحيب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          الفقارى                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           للريال                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           وللجنيه
جيت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      يمي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      من                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       شموخ                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       وكبرياء                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ومن                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       فخرمثل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     شيخٍ                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     بالمواقف                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      كل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ربعه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      تنتخيه
أنتضرتك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     كأني                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     اللي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     جالسٍ                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     فوق                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     الجمرجاملي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    قلب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    المعذب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    في                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    وصالك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    وأرحميه
انتضر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     لحظة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     وصالك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     لين                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     مليت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      الصبروالمولع                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               ياغناتي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               اسعفيه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                وعالجيه
وحاليط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬للي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   لاظواها                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   الليل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    واغواه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    السهرزارنيط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬يفك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    وطيفك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    بالبشر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    ماله                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    شبيه
أرسمك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    صورة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    تشابه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    فالسماء                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    وجه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     القمركل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ليله                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      مع                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       خيالك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ابتديه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       وانتهيه
وكل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     ماشفتك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     اغني                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     الخبر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     نفس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      الخبرماطرا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          علم(ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          جديدٍ                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ياخفوقي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           تحتريه
ياغناتي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           والمعزة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           مالها                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            عندي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            عمرالعمر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     فدوة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     عيونك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      كان                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      تبغينه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      خذيه
عاتبيني                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    لجلط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬شوفك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    كل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    ماشح                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    النظروأزعلي                                                                                                                                                                                                              ورضاك                                                                                                                                                                                                               غايه                                                                                                                                                                                                               والله                                                                                                                                                                                                               اني                                                                                                                                                                                                               ل/ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬شتريه
أنت                                                                                                                                                                             بس                                                                                                                                                                             اللي                                                                                                                                                                             رضاكط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬قوم                                                                                                                                                                             له                                                                                                                                                                              عز                                                                                                                                                                              وقدركأني                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    الشهم                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     الكريم                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     اللي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     يراضي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     والديه
انت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       كلك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ياغناتي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       غير                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        عن                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        كل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        البشرانت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     بس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     اللي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     خفوقي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ياحياتي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      يهتويه
شفت                                                                                                                                                                            في                                                                                                                                                                            عينك                                                                                                                                                                            عفاف                                                                                                                                                                            وشفت                                                                                                                                                                            في                                                                                                                                                                             ذاتكط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬هرانت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     تشبه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     للكرامه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     في                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     تطاريح                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      الوجيه
لو                                                                                                                                                                             بعضط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬حيان                                                                                                                                                                             من                                                                                                                                                                             قدام                                                                                                                                                                              خلق                                                                                                                                                                              الله                                                                                                                                                                              يمركل                                                                                                                                                                                                      خلق                                                                                                                                                                                                      الله                                                                                                                                                                                                      تقول                                                                                                                                                                                                      الله                                                                                                                                                                                                      عليه                                                                                                                                                                                                      الله                                                                                                                                                                                                       عليه
ولو                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       بغيتي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       نور                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       عيني                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       سقته                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       لعينك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        مهروالكلام                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     اللي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      اقوله                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      لازم                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      اني                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      احتميه
ودي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       اني                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       اعتذر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       لك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       بس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ماعندي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        عذربس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         شاعرك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          المعذب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          اعذريه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          وسامحيه
جعلك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     تعيش                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     بسعادة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     مايجي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     حالك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     كدرومن                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    يعادي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    حضرتك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    جعل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    المصايب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     تبتليه
تبغى                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         الصراحه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         والحقيقه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         بالمفيد                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         المختصرأنت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     بس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     اللي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     خفوقي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ياحياتي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      يهتويه






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قديم 24-03-2008, 10:59 PM   رقم المشاركة : 2
خالد العمري
مشارك






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قديم 24-03-2008, 11:06 PM   رقم المشاركة : 3
ابوعبدالرحمن القريشي
شاعر





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عندما اغوص في اعماق شعرك لا اجد الا الدرر
يحتار القلم في وصف المشاعر حيال ما تكتب
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قديم 24-03-2008, 11:34 PM   رقم المشاركة : 4
صوت الإحساس
علي الغامدي/شاعر/عضو شرف
 الصورة الرمزية صوت الإحساس





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قديم 25-03-2008, 12:36 AM   رقم المشاركة : 6
ســُلاف
هدوء/وردة الفطاحلة





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قديم 25-03-2008, 01:09 AM   رقم المشاركة : 7
فرحان العنزي




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قديم 25-03-2008, 01:36 AM   رقم المشاركة : 8
سناعيس
سليمان السالم/شاعر عضو شرف
 الصورة الرمزية سناعيس





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اللهم ارحم والدتي وأسكنها الفسيح من الجنان واحشرها مع الانبياء وعبادك الصالحين وأموات المسلمين
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قديم 25-03-2008, 01:49 AM   رقم المشاركة : 9
الخنساء
عضو شرف
 الصورة الرمزية الخنساء





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قديم 25-03-2008, 08:34 AM   رقم المشاركة : 10
الطامي
منصور المري/شاعر/نائب المشرف العام
 الصورة الرمزية الطامي





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ماطرقت ألآ النزية ومـا كتبـت ألآ النزيـة
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توقيع الطامي
 
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